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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was so so sad. Beautifully written, excellent show of emtions. the flow was perfect, and the message was clear. I don't know you but, I will never forget you or what you just wrote. Excellent work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a sad poem and written nicely with perfect flow and rhyme. however,i do not agree with the message as we are all here for a reason, no one is better than no one. we have to have courage to go ahead in life and make something that people remember us for.
    once a pearl fall down on a ocean, every drop of water were waiting for the pearl to get them, a drop said, i wouldnt even bother as in this big ocean why this pearl would even come close to me? however that pearl got to the same drop which became a piece of diomand.....

    you are something, as not everyone has your poetry talent..... think of it that way, as you are and artist cause poetry is the best form of art in which you are perfect.

    keep up the great job, and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 16 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is a sad poem but you are not nothing! I loved the flow and the rhyming in it. i hope you the best of luck :) 5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, with a lot of heart and full of meaning, the flow was great
    You would think I'm nothing
    If you had ever met me
    You might put on a fake smile
    But you would soon forget me~~~keep up the great work, you area very bright young lady and I respect that with a very big heart, your friend Tracy

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Very sad. but beautifully written. you have a way with words and the flow, which seems to always be magnificent, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem...sad though but beautifully penned work filled with beauty and meaning!
    Kp up the good work dear!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked this one. And I agree with everyone it was a magnificant write. You are a very good poet.. not nothign as you claim to be in this poem. A nothing is a waste of space and you were put here to share your experiences through your words and you are doing a fine job of that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Charming

    This is a great and very insightful poem, I'm sorry that you feel that way if it is about you, try to let optimism light the path of your future.

    PrinceCharming,

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow great poem. i really liked"I once was afraid of nothing
    Until i knew i was wasting space
    Then I thought of suicide
    But was scared of the pain I'd face" your a goot poet and im putting u into my favs.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Very sad poem, but truly spectacular! keep up the great writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Very sad poem, but truly spectacular! keep up the great writing!