Bitter Nostalgia

With this one, I like the imagery, but I think you have a typo...should it be "we're" instead of "were" in the last line of the first stanza?

This poem definitely does not feel melancholy to me, more like abandoned carnival ground at midnight...Like I said I like your imagery, it is very invoking, but I wouldn't mind if you explained things to me a bit. :)

Greeat, the thing that most attracted me is the beautiful vocabulary used. The flow is good and meanings great. 5/5 from me. Keep up the spirit

I love when I go to read someone's poem and it's like nothing I've read before. On the originality I'd give a 5/5 alone, but it's also very well penned. I actually enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. 5/5

Marcella

This reminds me of terminator.
(Man on a mission)
But then this person is a drunk
Staggering
Looking for something
I supposed we're all fools here.
It's funny how you said that.
It kind of made me realize
That people don't look in the mirror.
He calls everyone a fool.
But he doesn't realize he's the biggest one of all.
I give this, my dear, a 5/5 :]

Now.
You're more of a story prose instead of poem writter, but damn, I loved it.

You had me captured from the beginning until the end, and I'm really pick, so that's hard to do. Be proud.

Nicely, nicely done. Kudos.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5