Comments : My Walk Through Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Many nights and days I have walked up the road with my eyes closed to the bad but my mind open to the good
    The same way I walk through my life, with my mind closed to all the lies and fears but my trust held in my ambition to take me to my place.
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    ^ I love the ending. this poem was real good. it seems like it came straight from the heart. very inspiring. never stop. 5/5

    ` Liz

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good poem but i think some lines are little too long.