Comments : Transport

  • 16 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This should b in the romance or sad..dontcha think? its pretty good in my eyes i guess...i think u could of added a bit of more poetiveness or more detail a lil but luv the line bout the heart and fold.....very good on tht...but just check lik agrammar or puncutaion or watever and u hav a good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by hippiehxc

    Drake. I think we need to talk about some stuff.
    Message me on PV when you get the chance.
    Anyway, I love the poem. <3
    5/5 darling.

    Love,
    Grace.