Haha, im not going to get you on grammer or punctulization. (: emotions are the way to go. its the message underneath that matters. good work.
seems like you are pretty darn upset. although why would you not liston if only a week had past?
seems highschool-ish. just a dudes point of view..
(:

That was awesome, seriously you tell him

Good poem.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

That was awesome, and who cares about grammer and punction when you have a peice like this one filled with so much emtion. powerful write 5/5 I could feel your hate, and i found myself hating someone i didn't even know. wonderful.

^ I think I do. Grammar and Punctuations are essential in the art of writing. But, then again, I wouldn't cite those errors nor try to advise you to fix it. The tone of the poem infuses so much intensity and emotion throughout, it's one major highlight of this piece. And I think it's a good thing you've poured out all these negative emotions rather than bottling them up to yourself. All in all, it's a fine, emotive piece. =]

I think u must put this one in the sad category coz i honestly it make me feel so sad.. i can truly feel how deep ur emotion. actually i can relate this line....

But what happened?
You LIED and are with her now.
You broke me more then you know
I keep telling myself to forget you
But my heart would not let me

i have the same situation regarding this poet, so for me this is really great and totally perfect emotion.. excellent job and thaks a lot for sharing i can relate it at the same time.. 5/5

Aww.. I'll add this to my fav. :P I have a simillar poem :P But I haven't submitted it here.. anyway comment part.

The use of the 'caps' was very effective for the tone of the poem. Very emotional poem! well done! I really like this poem! I can relate to it :) well written! keep writing!

I think the rhyming was a bit forced
The flow was a tad off
but the idea was there

"How does that make you feel. That I never BROKE
I know I feel better knowing that it did not happen
You tried your hardest to have me.
Guess what It did not work."

this is my favorite part, its like saying that they tried to hurt you but you really didnt care and have moved on. there is so much emotion running through it, so 5/5

Hmmm. this seemed to me more like a journal entry instead of a poem. I think that it should have a metaphore or two or some other poetic device in it to make it stand out more. However, with that said, I really loved the words that you chose to make stand out. It gave the poem emphasis. where it was really needed.

This is great to me i find no problem. when you have to just let your feelings out it does not have to be perfect. great job i enjoyed and loved the emotion.5/5

I don't mean to change your poem
But it would sound a whole lot better
If it was
saying you would always hold - to - me.
It just flows better, kind of rolled off my tongue...
I'm not big on hating.
I've never actually hated anyone.
So I don't quite understand this poem.
Or I don't feel what you feel.
But I do think that people have been doing
A lot about what this.
So it IS kind of cliched.
But not counting that,
I think your writing is "okay"
It's not the best I've seen out of you
But it's also not the worst :]
I'll give you a 4...
Never mind.
I won't vote.
Unless you want me to :]

I love it:)
-Elizabeth

Great poem...U gave a clear picture of the emotions in this 1...and i liked the way u've highlighted the words with caps....winderful poem in short!!..kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

OMG thats exactly what is going on with my ex now, he broke up with me for another girl and is now trying to talk to me again now that im happy with my boyfriend..i have got to add you to my favorites now!~

Some of it rhymes, some doesn't....that should be fixed. It doesn't flow as well as your poem should/could. I like the topic and the meaning behind the poem, but if you work on those little things, this poem could be really really good! :)

I thought the fact that it was emotional
is great!!
That's how you are suppose to write poems
during a horrible feeling or good whichever it may be
Nice job
5/5

Wow... great emotion. i love it

I love the emotion that you included in this poem. It had a very nice flow and the emotions flowed nicely. Keep up the good work.

Alyson

I feel the exact same way.
but not because of a guy.
because of a best friend.
great job