Comments : A Whale of a Tale

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This piece is so funny. It reminds me of the one that got away. LMAO
    What wonderful imagery in this poem. I had such a hard time picking my favorite part.

    Then he did the oddest thing
    He flipped that way and this
    He jumped up off the ground
    And kissed me on the lips.

    While I was busy wiping off
    The gritty awful stench
    He gave a hearty laugh at me
    And back in the lake he went.

    These two stanzas really had me laughung.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Son of a gun, that was great! I loved this poem, and the ending wrapped it up perfectly. Honestly Darling, I couldn't find anything wrong with this, I love it!

    5.5
    =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Jeannie this is an awesome poem !!

    Then he did the oddest thing
    He flipped that way and this
    He jumped up off the ground
    And kissed me on the lips.
    ^^^
    I love this part .... Gives a new meaning to the word fish lips ... lol

    It made me so excited to go fishing though. I'm a fish fanatic. May 18th whooohooo it opens ..
    Almost every weekend in the summer we leave Friday afternoon and come back on Sunday ...
    Mostly catch and release ...
    I'm going to read this to Josh tonight, I know he'll love it!
    Take care Auntie

  • 11 years ago

    by Ayumi

    OMG!! What a funny and -absolutely- nice poem! :D (5/5) Check mine out if you can! It's not much but at least there's some!

  • 11 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Hahah I absolutly love this!