I gave you 5/5 for it is worth it but there are some bits you need to correct. Those are:
makes/brings, Fills/filled. I mean to look for the correct tense..otherwise this poem is perfect :)

Tc
Fsams

Aww i can see a tear forming in my eye i love this poem u definately showed how you feel for your brother
xx

This is a really beautiful poem, im sure he is proud of you, and he will definately live on in your heart
xx

This is a really beautiful poem. It is easy to see that you loved and still love your brother. I am sure that he would be very proud of you. 5/5

Kalee

Im sorry for your loss.. but im sure your brother would be so happy that you wrote such a beautiful poem for him.

as for the poem...the flow was okay..in some places it was a little sloppy. overall i give you a 4/5.

Beautiful. I love it!
Great job!

Great piece, i think your brother would be proud of you and it is always great to keep the memory alive in a creative way. loved this poem, nicely written, 5/5

nikki

Nice metaphors all the way to the end. Rhyming a bit weak. This poem, though, deserves a 5/5. Good luck in your next poem

The imagery here just blew me away.
I loved the language you used and
everything flowed perfectlly.
Well done *5/5*

Excellent poem. Loved the structure and it is wonderfully written. The imagery was beautiful as well and I loved your use of metaphors.

5/5

-Shannon <3

I'm sorry about your brother..

your poem was beautiful, you put a lot of emotion into this.. i really enjoyed reading it. My favorite stanza was this one:

Stars and moon so bright
Telling me that your my light
When i am in the dark

overall your rhyming and flow were great

amazing job

5/5

Well im sorry for your lost....
but that poem was great
i it was full of emotion....

Very good. 5/5

5/5!!!

I love how you related nature to some very real emotions that you are feeling. You have a very natural way of getting across BIG messages. All of your poems are great! =]

The imagery here was outstanding.
and you're choice of words was simply
amazing, as well as the flow. :]
you've created kind of a mysterious mood
to the poem, which i really like. and the
emotion, itself, being captured is great too.
a very beautiful write. :] 5/5.

It was very well-written! The flow was good, I loved the word choice, and the concept was unique! 5/5

A truly beautiful poem. I admire your strong will. 5/5