Comments : I Believe

  • 10 years ago

    by Linds

    Nice...it's like you have a lot of happyness in you. 5/5
    ---Sophia

  • 10 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Hey its a nice poem : ) i have some tips for you if you would like to hear them? p.m me : )
    nice outlook on life very postive i would give it a 4/5 tho based on the word choices but other then that i enjoyed it thanks for sharing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Halley

    This one is ok
    I like that line "I believe in achieving the unexpected" cause it's deep.....I like deep

  • 10 years ago

    by XxDifferent Then You KnowxX

    Not bad, I like it I like your some what view on life it's true

  • 10 years ago

    by kristine

    Well i really like this poem...very inspiring.. actually i love it 5/5

  • ~very true... i like this poem very deep and honest, i like it when people try to send messages to their readers.....keep writing....your good at it!!=)~
    ~Wendy~

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem dear...u've penned a great message through this 1..kp up the good work!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    This is so true
    keep writing

    and thanks for the comment on mine, i appreciate it.

  • 10 years ago

    by LaShelle

    I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE DIS ONE
    BUT IT WAS OKAI I MEAN U COULD DO ALOT OF BEEN IN MY OPOPIN JUST TELLING THE TRUTH AS I WOULD SAY " BEING REAL " AND NOW ......NO DISRESPECT JUST WHAT I FEEL

  • 10 years ago

    by Sinkaku

    Very insightful. However, I DO have one argument; You CAN truly love another and utterly hate yourself; it's happened to me ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I like what message your trying to send but, you've got to remember that most of us were hurt from loving someone and hate ourselves for it and don't love again because of the fear of getting hurt again.

  • 10 years ago

    by Annzie16

    Wow... that was very good. I totally belive in the God part... He is a very big part of my life! Keep up the awsome work...how long have you been writing?

  • 10 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    Very true poem...and written beautifuly 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Wow, it's amazing how all of the things you said in this poem are so true. I hate people who judge you by your appearence. nice job 5/5
    rose <@>

  • 10 years ago

    by Bree

    This is a really great poem, and....so true! A book shouldn't be judged by its cover i believe in that, gave it a 5/5 hope thats ok :-)
    Bree x

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    I like this one! very nice poem!! thanks for the comment! 5/5 for me! =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I agree to this very much so. I told the same to my friend who didn't believe me. At least I know someone understands.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    I think this poem is very positive and it kinda puts you in a positive way of thinking... I like this poem, and it really does make sense...keep on writing...5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by erickson

    Only 14 years old, and you're like a professional, keep like this you will go far

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaylee

    THere is a lot of truth in this poem! Good work!