"Would you speak in regret, of all the bad things you caused in your life,
or would you whisper the words, that names your sweet and devoting wife?"

That line was the line that stood out for me!
It kind of summed up the thoughts that would be going through my mind (change wife to husband though, lol)
A very interesting topic! It really makes you think!
5/5
*Gem*

This is a;; truth you have written thats all good. i liked that all. good work

Wow, this is amazing! i love the title and the subject. i love the idea about the last minute of your life, as i was reading it, i was asking myself these questions and wondering what i would be thinking if i had five minutes left.
anyways... the rhyming was good, it didnt seem forced at all. the flow was ok, it was a little jumy at parts, but i only barely noticed.

"Could you believe that there is another avenue for you to go,
a simple shadow of our reality, hidden from our mortal soul?"
^ that was my favorite part, i loved it!

great job, wonderful poem... 5/5

I am so glad to have read this poem. I would give you a 10/5 if I could.. Notice that some of your words got messed up by the computer because you added an apostrophe. This website does not like apostrophe's apparently. lol. In my opinion this poem makes you think really hard about what you would do if you were in that position. So at the end of the poem, you are left in a calm mood thinking about that. So I recommend you change the "!" to a period at the very last sentence. You have such EXCELLENT talent! (can I have some?lol) Not only am I going to give you a 5/5 but I am adding you to my favorites. I would like to read all of your poems when I get the chance. have a nice day! God bless!

Another 5/5 dude. You have talent! Do you rap or something, because the flow in the last poem and this one, I could put a beat to it easily. Well, just pointing that out. Very good, keep it up. :)

I really really love this poem, it freaken amazing!! i like this one more than the other one, yea i really really like this poem.

That was a real interesting poem. i like the topic you chose and the questions you asked.
very engrossing. it is almost funny how much of our lives we waste being what we dont want to be.
excellent poem
Love is the law.
Love under will
Rocky

So, this is like the flash before your eyes just before you die and your thoughts on it?
I think I may've missed the darker meanings within it.
But that would be my own loss.
Still with one reading I liked it, and hopefully with a second, I'll understand.