Little things that make us smile.

by Miu   May 10, 2007


The prettiest words you say.
The most amazing things you do,
The most little things that make us smile,

In sandy beach, the longest walks,
The tight hugs, and longer talks.
The most little things that make us smile,

The next day texts, missing you they say
And I been thinking of you since you left today.
The most little things that make us smile.

Tonight, I'll be holding your hand tight,
And whisper I love you with my eyes open wide.
You are the most special person who makes me smile.

This is my first love poem ever. Thank you for reading.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Awww this piece is sooo sweet!!! it really made me smile and go 'awww' while i read it, it has a positive glow about it and it's a really really good piece :D
    5/5
    - ali x x x x x

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Your first poem?
    wow i wish my first poem was even half compared to that.
    It was good, Some things could have been changed.. maybe take out a couple "the's" but other than that it was good.
    =]
    5/5
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    I liked the ryhmes and structure of the poem, however; the flow wasn't that great. Overall it was a great write. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was sweet, but it just wasnt all there for me, but one thing i noticed that you did was the first stanza didnt rhyme and neither did the last one, nice job, but i guess it was a pretty good poem but i have to give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittini

    Its really cute has good capitivation of emotions really liked it made me smile and the wording was great keep up the great work 5/5

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