I am the worm

An unique poem.
Like it.
Great work

Wow I really liked how you switched from the birds to the worm at every other stanza and I liked the comparison there. What I liked the most in this poem though was the three descriptive lines below it. The only critique I have is the first descriptive lines were really good but I think that the last one needs a bit more punch. Nice work though.

Nice one, very interesting, different from anything I've read.

~*Alex*~

I liked it, it is different from any other poem I have read. I also liked how you used a birds and worms to show how society and life sometimes work. 5/5

Great imagery created with so few words, and an interesting structure makes this poem very original, it conveys a simple message very effectively. good write.

kim xx