Comments : Journey into the Twilight

  • 10 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Another fantastic job =D 5/5 like every other one of yours ^.^
    Keep them coming because I really love to read your work =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I really liked the flow and woridng
    And the subject was so unique
    Good job
    Take care
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    This is verry good. and very true! i wish that i could find a plcae so peaceful beyond the twilight!!! 5/5

    xo becca xo

  • 10 years ago

    by Mousie

    Really a great poem, it flowed so nicely and the vocab was wonderful. it was a very intriguing poem, great job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Oh my. your so young but you write divinely.
    you made me jealous. =P
    good job
    5/5

    <33Sparkxx

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow. this was beautiful, it made me smile, it really is an amazing poem that makes people think as well, the flow was very good and the vocabulary, 5/5
    gabriella