Comments : Long Lost Souls

  • 11 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was fantastic Nick =) 5 out of 5 like all your other ones =D You really are a great writer ^.^ lol I remember how I wrote at your age and still shudder just thinking about it xD
    Great job,
    Rhea

  • 11 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    5/5 Sounds very sad and yet inspiring!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was totally excellent and betifully penned
    My fave lines should be;

    The souls still seek out, the other soul adrift
    Souls meant to be found, left lonely in time to sift
    The end of all things sublime, divesting the universes wake
    Can be saved, if the souls can combine and re-awake.

    So cool and good description
    Well done
    Laura

  • 11 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Awesome poem Nick. I thought your descriptions of things in the poem were great. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Laloser05

    I find it so amazing, that an 11 year old can write so deeply. And a boy at that.
    Really, truly awesome.
    You are thoroughly talented.
    Keep writing for our sakes!!
    5/5 No questions asked!

  • 11 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Wow..taht was really good! u use some really good wording! deff a 5/5 from me!

    xo becca xo

  • 11 years ago

    by Mousie

    Again, i thought this was a really great poem, wonderful write, with great flow and great vocab. keep up the good work great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Huh, nice poem i liked it heard about you from ChaoticBB.

  • 11 years ago

    by darah

    Very nice! You've used some very good words in your poem. Go on like this!
    Greetz,
    Darah.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roxy

    I came across this one poem..From the forums. It's such a good poem!! You have an amazing talent..I'm jealous! -.-
    Please teach me how you rhyme so well =[.
    These days I can't seem to make a decent poem.
    xx Rox

  • 11 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
    I'll appreciate your comment and rating my poems

    I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is very well written, the rhyme scheme is great, good images and a deepness to the meaning and message. I wish I'd written half as good as you do when I was your age!

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 11 years ago

    by Mo

    Nick - you really amaze me with the things that come out of your youthful mouth!! You're going to go far thats for sure. :)

    Mo

    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by danyell

    This is really deep .... i love it ... it really makes me feel as if its happening rite then and thier

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenBrit

    Wow that's an awsome poem! It flows really good 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nick
    this poem was very well written
    The rhyming was right on
    the flow was pretty good
    and all together a good piece
    nice job
    5/5
    love always
    kaila

  • 11 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Ooh. i like it! very mystical. and deep! the only few things i dont love:
    The souls still seek out, the other soul adrift
    this makes no sense! you used 'the other' meaning in the first part you meant the one soul.. so it should be singular. i just dont like this line very much...

    and here:
    universes should be universe's

    but great job. i think if you made it longer. it'd be fantasmagorical. =]

    xox:Lauren

  • 11 years ago

    by manda

    Really great and inspiring for someone so young its amazing.................wow

  • 11 years ago

    by kennedy

    Nick- that was really amazing, it was somewhat sad but amazing. ur a really great writer. keep goin for wat u love!

    kennedy

  • 11 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    I liked tht... ur rele good!!!...