I like your poem, it seems so hard to be in your position, hope things get sorted with this. good work keep it up and take kare xxxxxx

This is really good as well..i like your poems..you should definately keep at it..it's a great way to relase your emotions.

5/5 i really liked thiz poem.....it was sad.....u should really keep writing cuz u are very good at writing yo feelingz down on paper

much luv
~!*Peachez*!~

Great work!!...sad but it'd beautiful especially cz of the emotions u've filled in to the lines.......it's like u've poured out your thoughts in to paper..Good job!
kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Tell me why did you dread her innocence

this one line has so much meaning.. amazing poem filled with so much emotion .. it was very powerful.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

It's nice poem . So Sad . And deep feeling ..

and thanks a lot for your comment

keep it up