Comments : Am I really that unknowing?

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Light,she = light, she

    Dear, don't forget to put a space after your comma's.

    Eyes wide open and revive. = Eyes wide open and (She) revive(s).

    Great poem and awesome job.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by Darlena

    I LiKE THiS.
    C0MMENT&RATE MY P0EM WHEN U GET THE
    CHANCE.
    THANX.