Life May Have Been Beautiful

Wow this is really good I loved the last tqo lines. They spoke wonders about the person in your poem and about the relationship its self. This poem was amazing because it tells the story of a one sided love with such passion and feeling. I loved how you described it, the metaphores were beautiful. I loved how each word rang with love and with hatred. A definate 5/5 from me for managing to display those two conflicting emotions so flawlessly.

This was beautiful...I particularly liked the metaphor that you used in this.
Flow was good throughout the entire poem, and the imagery you used in this was beautifully done, it creates vivid pictures.

The word farce... I like it. The piece overall was creative and emotional for you at least. I'm not sure if this is based on personal experiences or not it's hard to tell when so many people just write to ryhme. Regardless Great piece. Maybe sometime you can check out the few pieces I wrote and comment to see how I can improve because your writting is admirable

Excellent piece of poetry... 5/5

This is a good pome did it really happen??