Hey gurl this is payal i am a member now to so comment me to... me thingy is truelove07 okay go on it and read mines to....

I really like this one. Just please do my one favor, never change yourself for someone else. If they don't like you for who you are, that's their problem, and they're not right in the head. Great poem. =]

Uhm
ok

listen

frist you must cut int 4 line paragraph or stanza

dont make 1 big blick of wirtting , it wil not be good for a eye to read

second work more on the rhyming of your poem ,

i wont vote it now till you fix so you deserve the good grade

I really like the message in this
its a beautiful message that everyone should hear <3
and because of this, i'd love to see this in more depth, and longer (:

take care!
keep on writing (: