Lol...very good 1!!.but i think it shud be under funny poem section...kp up the good work anyways!
xxPoojaxx

Lol... wow. How kinda sorta random.

Lmfao. That's all I can say.

5/5
~Stephen White

Lmao.

Oh, I know where you're coming from. My computer can't[won't] multitask, either.

But I can't yell at it, cause I swear, it gets mad at me.

Like, it's looking at me right now...
Uhoh.
>_<

Oh, the only thing about this piece is that in the second stanza the line doesn't quite make sense.
It reads: "Why you so slow?" You might want to put an "are" in there, just for good measure.
=]
((Ps: Thanks so much for commenting my work, I'll try to tell you next time I get something up... I'm like what you said in your profile, though. I don't write unless I'm inspired to do so... I tried doing the "write everyday" thing, and it just made me feel like poetry was a chore. Bad idea!!!))

So, yeah. After this horrendously(sp?) long comment... Heh.
I like your poem. The end.
XP

I thought about putting an 'are' in there but then theres too many syllables so i decided against it. thanks for the sugestion tho !

Writers always find ways to get the readers attention, you have what it takes.