If I Can

I like this poem but it is more like a verse you should try adding more to it. I think it would be great with more added but it is another great poem. 5/5

I like this poem but it is more like a verse you should try adding more to it. I think it would be great with more added but it is another great poem. 5/5

I liked it. It was a little short but it was good. I gave it a 5/5.

Short... but amazing. i really think that you can tell how genuine the emotion is just from reading it. i love the first two lines. great job!

I loved the emotion in this poem! It was short, but full of meaning. To stop the pain that everyone feels would be a great accomplishment indeed.
How you worded this poem also added to it. Particularly how you repeated, "I shall no longer cry in vain."Great job, keep it up :D! 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist