Very appreciative write, not a cliche mother's day line in sight throughout the poem. Just purely from the heart, unique and with a personal touch. The flow varied a bit from stanza to stanza but not much. 5/5

Absolutly beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes, thats not a lie either, i love my mom and i know what you mean with she put u before herself in everything, theres not enough words to describe what a mother means to a child but if there was it would be the most beautiful word in the world, very very good poem 5/5

Very true. You have great feelings to your mom. Dats really nice. I liked your poem from A to Z. 5/5

Weird!! its okay though x

Aw, such a beautiful and wonderful write you have wrote for your mother. I know I'm late on this comment. I finally have time. But well done. Really, any mother that would read this would be proud. Keep up the awesome work! God bless 5/5
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This is soo good!! And soo sweet!
peace

Great poem thou :):)..
it very touching one and great job pall

for sure our mom's mean so much to us and you pall you show it :):):):)... i dont have any thing to say but (wonderfull):):):)..

keep on :)

Wow this is such a sweet poem. my mother is the same way she would give up everything and anything in order to make sure me and my sister are happy and healthy. I'm glad that your mother is the same way. This poem shows a very strong woman. Such a sweet tribute. The only critique I have is the last line, "I'd die rather" I know its set up that way to make it rhyme but it doesnt sound right.