Well done i couldn't see a fault in this, completely flawless loved it well done. 5/5
i love the whole 'murder in the dark' thing it worked soooooooooo well!!

Omg!.........Beautiful acrostic...it flows naturallly and perfectly...well penned
"Deeper and deeper, the knife goes
Anger is pouring out of me
Ripping it all out of me
Killing me softly, my murder in the dark"
My favourite lines...amazingly penned!
Kp it up!
5/5!!
xxPoojaxx

This acrostic is amazing you portrayed being a killer fantasticly throughout the whole thing. The emotions were strong and i loved the flow it was nicely done. When i first saw the title i thought it would be about a killer but not you being the killer so that truely has amazed me. 5/5 from me well done~mel

I thought it was quite superb, a very nice read. the flow could have been a little better and not so choppy but otherwise it was good, 5/5

I think you had one meaning going on then you bratched out abit you held it together ar the end but I think it messed up the flow in the peice oh well good read take care Plot121

Excellent poem, I'm working on a similar format poem...not same topic, but same format idea. I like the language and imagery you invoke in your words, but hopefully you don't feel this way in reality. Nonetheless, great work!

This is great.. i always loved Acrostic. i have always wanted to write one to..

i dont see any fault with this. great flow..
great vocab and good images it created.
keep it up.. 5/5

"Maliciously and silently, I plan it all"

Heh. The opening line made me smirk for drawing my attention into it immediately. It reminded me of a little villain that I dearly adored in my dark-ish fictional reads. The idea was fine, although I slightly agree with Mr. Robert. You've created a momentum at the start, but it suddenly died out for...unknown reasons...Hmm Anyway, I loved how this poem was finely written with a rather fluidlike flow. (You have my props for that.) My pleasure to read. I love it! Keep them coming, Hippo! Love, Tiger

Beautiful!!