Ohh so sad! Dont get me wrong..excellent..but ohh. Makes me sad..but its good to have a reader filled with emotion because it was an emotional poem. Well written. I like how every line rhymed with one another. Its the first poem I've seen like that and I thought it was good. Nice job! 5 out of 5. XD

Lovely poem...touching deep beautiful way to wish for mother's day.it's so filled with emotion.....very deep way of expressing it!!..kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx.....

Excellent write from the heart and I really feel your pain ,,I still love you, I can't lie
I want you to know that before you die
My heart has become so cold, and I can't cry
I have been there I know what you feel trust me
~~~5/5 your friend Tracy