Oh my gosh..great poem!...i really liked it.. loved the use of words...and it flowed and rhymed nicely....excellent work!5/5

I didnt understand it at first but the last stanza really put it all together its a very good piece :)

Wow this is superb descriptive and metaphorical plus creative poetry. Very imaginative and nicely written. Truly amazing 5/5 all the way

tc
Fsams

On a Date with Death,
And I've never felt so alive.
Her crooked smile
Makes my heart burn up my insides.
he is hot as Hell,
With horns and a lovely forked tongue
he's a devil,
And he's as Evil as they come.

^fave part
5/5

Omg, that was just... WOW! that just blew me away, it amazed me to no end. i don't know what else to say other than just purely wonderful and you have an amazing talent. keep it up!

I really like this one. very unicue. i can feel the emotions in this. i rate this a 5

Wow, this is so unique.
first of all, i love the title. it made me want to read it that much more.
i really liked reading this.
i love your word choice and it flowed really well.
i would write down my favorite part... but i'd probably end up writing the poem over again!
great job!
5/5

First off, this poem is going on my favorites.
Second, the depth was simply astonishing.
Third, you are a great poet..
and that is why.. You are getting my "special rating".
I only do this for people who deserve it.
Overall Rating: 6.0/5.0

I LOVE this poem! Wonderful job! And thank you for your comment on mine! :)

I found this to be really morbid which had a great effect on me. It was chilling and also had me in suspense from start to end. A gripping piece which didn't bore me at all. I've read a few of your poems now and this is by far your best work in my opinion. Creativing and a really strong concept which was different and unique. I truely did enjoy this poem.~mel

OH MY GOD, i saw this title in the discussion request room , i just had to read it, n im really glad i did, it was perfect, i've read nothing like it but damnn i love it 5/5 im going to read another one

Wow thisis one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. 5/5 all the way

Wow thisis one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. 5/5 all the way

I really liked this. It definitely painted a lovely story. I liked the play on words and the descriptions. I liked how he took you down memory lane. Great style and a great read. I have nothing bad to say about it. 5/5

Wow!That was freakin' awesome.I was entranced in this poem.It takes a dang good poem to keep my attention and you managed that effortlessly.The ending was absolutely great.5/5 for sure!

Woow. This one was superb! It had a great start to it, and it was very well written all the way to the end. And the ending...WOW. I loved it. It was so unexpected and just so out in the open at the same time. Very well done with the plot.

The rhyming was good, I really didn't think many of them were too cliche at all, and the words just came slipping out of my mouth with such ease (yes, i read poems aloud because it helps me determine flow, rhythm and rhymes). So, I congratulate you on a job well done. =) Keep it up. 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Wow a very good poem a very very very good poem. The darkness of this poem makes it even better I think. Keep up the good work.

Wow.
That was simply fabulous.
So dark && morbid.
The word choices were flippin wonderful && overall, this has got to be your best poem. Iloveit! 5.5

- Stephyy <3

This was such a unique piece. It's different from anything I've read lately, which is always refreshing. I give it a 5/5. You're a great writer. Thanks for sharing.

marcella

I don't understand it one bit but it was amazing!
5/5 :)
Just that great.