Well done.
Accrostic's can be tricky, but it looks like you had no trouble.
Beautiful!.
Keep it up.
Deepest love

Accrostic's can be diffcult to write, but it looks like you did an amazing job. the word choice was excellent, the imagery was vivid, everyline just seem to fit togateher. Well done. 5/5

Woah
how can you even write an accrostic
I have so much trouble
it seems as though its your thing
I really enjoyed this one as well
wonderful job

Im not much of a nature person but its wuzz ok 4/5

I've never seen anyone talk about rivers like that. how cities can ruin you, and nature can flood you. awesome work

your servant:
david

Wow!!...beautiful penned acrostic...mean u've handled this art wuth ease...kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

It was beautiful, you have a way with words, even the simplest of words. It was truly a treat to read and it flowed very well. "I hope enjoy your peaceful beauty." I think you are missing a to between hope and enjoy. all in all perfect 5/5

This is also really beautiful, i haven't read that many of your poems, but what i like about them is their inner strength and flow, and how calming they are. this one made me smile as well.
5/5
gabriella

Change "way to late" to "way too late"
I like the metaphor you have incorporated into the poem.
I like the "I hope enjoy your peaceful beauty." line. Very nice poem, and good use of parenthesis.

Very nice topic, I love how its a metaphore within itself.

I don't like how the last line is out of place, with or without the parenthesis, it is out of place. Also the structure is a bit mucky, with commas in random places that distrupt the flow.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Good job with the acrostic and I like the message within this write. Its a pity how
people are ruining mother nature's nartual beauty..

"Nature has keep you going this long but"
good line but... it should be kept not keep just saying other than that a few other words should be changed like the "way to late" to "way too late" kinda a proof read if you will... the poem overall is outstanding and beautiful its inspiring and you are an amazing poet