This was a beautifully sad written poem you have here debbs. I enjoyed it all and found it to be quite interesting. Your vocab never stops to amaze me. Well done on a nicely written short poem. Loved it ~mel
I like this poem evn tho its kinda hard 2 interpret...i love the line "fire gone gray in his ardent heart". i can totally imagine it. you worded this poem so well. well keep writing! don't let the writer's block get 2 u!
I suppose I took this alot differently than every one else. I took this as a story of a battle between good and evil. A story of the devil awaiting his next victim only to have come upon the death of a angel. I love the way it can be taken many ways. I agree after reading other comments that it can be taken as love shunned, but my first opinion was that of the afterlife. The write held me and I was mesmerized by the strong vocabulary in this piece. You have done a wonderful job with the imagery and the flow. Great Job 5/5
You are sduch a talented girl i love your poems, it is funny you live on the other side of the world but i know alot about philipians casue i jsut took a test on it. keep writting 5/5 you are such an inspiration
I interpreted this as love gone wrong...not sure if I'm right lol
I loved the imagery you used in this, it was beautifully done, created very vivid pictures for the reader.
Word choice was a joy to read, as was the whole poem.
Flow is flawless throughout, and the ending to me, seemed very intense and sad.