Still There

by Tara   May 14, 2007


The girl whispers softly
a melody in the air
but no ones there to listen
nobody seems to care

but if someone heard the whisper
then maybe it would turn into a song
then maybe she would have a future
cause death doesn't have you live long

and everyday she softly smiles
you wouldn't know that it is fake
she is hiding within herself
withstanding the worlds take

You would have never know what she whispered
yet her song would be stuck inside
You would think about her all day long
wondered why she shyed

The girl who whispered
the song in the air
is no longer with us
but somehow she feels like she's there

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  • 16 years ago

    by kida

    I like this poem i've been so sad all day n this made me cry b ut i love it anyway lol;. please commet on my poems 'don't make my mistakes' and if u want maybe on some of my other ones too? tnx from kida xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by OuR oWn BrAt PaCk

    I really love this poem it was deep and i felt i really connected to it you did a very good job keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Hmm,...tht ws very different,,

    deep and twisted...i really liked it

    and the best part is...you can look at this poem
    from any side and it'll have a different story...

    really nice

    keep it up ..