He's Different

by skynerraw   May 15, 2007


He suddenly lit up the room
I've never noticed it before
I come out of my tomb
I never flirt with guys like this anymore

I catch myself staring
I smile, it doesn't matter what anyone thinks
He see's me, but I'm not caring
He stares back and winks

I laugh loudly
Causing heads to turn
I smile proudly
As my face starts to burn

I stare at my math book
As the teacher looks up
I sneak a look
And not to my surprise, yup

He looked over too
I look down rolling my eyes
I want to say "I'm falling in love with you."
Much to my surprise

I've only felt this way once before
Thats way over now
But this seems like much more
How did I let this happen? HOW?

I swore to myself, a while back
That I didn't want a guy
But that's what I lack
A man that takes me high

So should I tell him?
Should I not?
He doesn't seem dim
And doesn't think I'm JUST hot

*-Sky-*

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  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awwww, this one is so cute ;p
    it's so frickin adorable
    my favorite stanza is,
    "He looked over too
    I look down rolling my eyes
    I want to say "I'm falling in love with you."
    Much to my surprise"
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I like the words u chose for this one.. vey good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well written for a 12 yr old u have alot of talent, i wish I would have been able to write like that at 12. anyway, the flow was a little off, and the staza with yup in it felt a little forced other than that u did an excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Overall it was good.

    'I stare at my math book
    As the teacher looks up
    I sneak a look
    And not to my surprise, yup'

    That rhyming seemed forced. ^^

    Other than that, it was great. 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I think this is cute.
    Just the emotions I felt into this one.
    It made me wish I could stay
    The same age
    And feel the way you felt.
    For a 12 year old,
    You're not so bad.
    I was expecting sloppy grammar
    And cliched writing.
    It WAS a bit cliched.
    But not totally.
    It was pretty good, I have to admit.

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