Comments : My Heart Belongs To You

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    Hmm interesting poem David. The way you structured it made emphasis on some of the lines, to me anyway, and the flow was really good. It's such a happy poem, it made me smile knowing you are so full of love. Well done on another awesome poem. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Well thats a sincere word of love, and hope that person u love, are truly lucky! its really hard to find people whom we loved and be loved,, w/ a true feelings.... and w/ all of their hearts. but ur feelings here very appreciated at the same time i can feel it was truly express ur feelings and emotion to someone u love too.. it was powerful msg and very worded. so over all i think it written well and great putting some expressions in ur poet. 5/5

    god bless!

  • 10 years ago

    by CrazyNlove

    That was beautifull. i loved it!

  • 10 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 excellent poem. it was very well writen and i liked your style in this poem. it was different. i love different. :) the repetition in this poem worked very well and all together it was very well done. :)

    -Lith

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    I liked the structure. All your emotions were brought on nicely. A sweet one. Flow was great. Interesting write, different. Amazing one! Keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    A beautiful write ,I loved it ,well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    David
    What a lovely poem. Your love really shines in this piece.

    I am love struck
    My heart belongs to you

    My heart sings your beauty
    Your presence, your grace

    These lines are so sweet.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessieca

    Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessieca

    Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessieca

    Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessieca

    Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessieca

    Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Ohhhh.
    this is such a sweet and happy poem, it almost makes me cry when i read stuff like this because it's so beautiful and happy.....
    wow. 5/5
    gabriella

  • 10 years ago

    by alone in the crowd

    This is such a wonderful write! you are a very talented person! 5/5 please rate and comment some of mine!

    -Ashley

  • 10 years ago

    by x fallin fast x

    Wat is ur second name?

  • 10 years ago

    by Mona F

    Hey! nice peom!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    This is great poem! I really love it! Keep going on good job!
    -Kath

  • 10 years ago

    by Jess

    Wow that is a great peom!!!!! Keep up the good work.

    xoxoxo
    Jess

  • 10 years ago

    by Brea McDade

    Wow tht was very nice you should stop by my page and read sum of my poem i am new on here so i will post more 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by iminlovewithhim

    Very touching