THIS WAS AMAZING I LOVE THIS ONE SOO MUCH I CANT BELIEVE HOW MUCH I CAN RELATE IT WAS JUST THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS THAT MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM I FEEL LIKE I CAN READ THIS OVER AND OVER AND NEVER GET SICK OF IT. 5 out of 5
This had a very great meaning but your flow was a little off. I suggest to stick with one thing, if you're going to have a rhyming stanza, you should make everything rhyming. It just distracts the reader from the whole meaning. But this poem had great emotion, so it sort of covered the flow. All in all, this was a pretty good poem.