Rain (Haiku)

by BeautifulxMess   May 15, 2007


Rain; It falls forever
Never does it leave my sight.
Rain; hides my bleak hurt.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This was good
    Although...
    The word "Bleak" kind of ruined it for me
    It was as though it wasn't part of the poem.
    It felt secluded.
    I thought it ruined the flow of your poetry.
    Other than that.
    Beautiful work, dearest :]