No grieving for the lost love

by Fsams   May 16, 2007


No grieving for the lost love
For it was worth losing
No more tears to cry and shed
Eyes are safe from worthless bruising

Unsatisfied from my pure love
You changed your course to a new
Left me lone without a reason
No more love, memories to renew

Go away and never come back to me
I will not listen to you again
You've broken my very heart
And never will the pieces regain

No grieving for the lost love
For it was worth losing

Written by Fsams
16/05/2007
15:10

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Good poem.
    The flow naturally and your emotions well expressed.
    Liked reading this piece.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I can relate to this poem a lot
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  • 16 years ago

    by ShootingStar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is sad.... it really is..it touched my heart...your emotions were well expressed throughout the entire write.and i had no problem reading this because the flow was perfect.

    another job well done.5/5 once again.