Comments : Live Your Dream

  • 16 years ago

    by Israfel

    Great! I understood the message you were trying to get across and it rhymed well. Great job. 5/5

    --Iz

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was amazing. It flowed so smoothly and it had a very beautiful message. You did a really good job with this poem. Great Job!