Gem
I read this on the boards also. You did a teriffic job! The imagery is beautiful. I can invision this scene in my mind.

Willow trees dip their tresses
In water of indigo blue
Swaying side to side
In a hypnotising fashion

This stanza is my favorite :)
Well done.
Love Cindy

This was just so peaceful! I loved it a lot!!! One of those poems that just makes you take a deep breath. Very cool, Gem. And btw-you are too sweet for the comments on my poems. Thank you very much...they are ALWAYS appreciated. Thanks, Girl! :)
~Midnight Sun

Intresting reflection :) we dont have many willows here :( actually none at all in this city so this poem made me miss europe :( you always seem to connect well with your readers whats your secret i'll take 3 :P
99/5

Gem,

Free verse... and such a beautiful one at that, Probably one of my faves of yours. Such a peaceful piece. Loved it.

Always,
Jeannie

Willow trees dip their tresses
In water of indigo blue
Swaying side to side
In a hypnotising fashion.

Wow...5/5. All the best.

Ray Blue

Such serene ambiance induces a sense of respite in my -chaotic- mind. (Coughs.) This poem is perfectly admiring. I specially adore the imagery you had created and the simplicity in substance and style. Bravo! Love, Debbie

"Willow trees dip their tresses
In water of indigo blue
Swaying side to side
In a hypnotising fashion"

I could picture that in my mind so perfectly, almost like a scene out of the movie My Girl lol Fantastic poem with amazing imagery. 5/5

This was definitely an outstanding piece of work. Excellent Job and beautiful imagery.

Kay

This was beautiful and very serene. The great descritions made for wonderful imagery. Not to mention the vocab in this one was outstanding. 5/5

marcella