Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star

by LithiumSacrifice   May 17, 2007


Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star

Twinkle, twinkle, little star
What made you be my deepest scar?
No matter what, we all must try,
But be ready to catch me for when I die
Twinkle, twinkle little star
What made you be my deepest scar?

Twinkle, twinkle, little star
Why must you be so far?
Out of reach when I cant fly
Must I wait 'till the day I die?
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
Why must you be so far?

Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How are you the way you are?
Like an angel in the sky
Hanging around to say goodbye
Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How are you the way you are?

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as you can see, it was based off of a children riddle.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awww!!.very sweet....creative!.perfectly flowed through out n the word choice was also superb!
    Kp writing!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again diffrent is good, I liked this.The word chice was amazing and the flow was perfect. The emtion was clear and strong. I think you did an excellnt job on this one. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...original and unqiue in concept and very creative.
    The repetition works well, and the imagery creates vivid pictures.
    Flow is beautiful throughout.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady C

    I love it!
    I tried to sing it and it went...pretty well, I don't really have a singingvoice...
    Anyway, love it!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem. 5/5. Good imagination.

    Ray

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