Comments : Reality

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Your poetry is so good how could i not give you a 5/5
    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very beautiful, I like the wordings are overall it is great. Flows well and has the poetic qualities :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Memories continually plague my mind was my favorite line. I love how you used the word plague. I think it seems more like a sad poem or a love poem than a dark poem. That's just me though you can keep it under whatever you want. I give it a four.

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    Wow such a beautiful poem loved readin it, keep writin love it xx

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    4.5/5
    this is really good.
    i liked it.
    your really talented.
    keep it up.
    <3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Your poem is so good. you have so much talent.. keep it up. 5/5