Face paint

by crystaljean88   May 18, 2007


My heart has been torn,
torn to pieces from that one day.

the feelings i have for you are so unreal,
why couldn't you have been the real deal?

i miss the kisses when you have your arms wrapped around me,
the way i feel when i was around you was truly amazing.

We did date for that little while,
My heart skipped a beat whenever i seen your smile.

I thought all was well and things would be great,
But things had to change once you seen me without the face paint.

I knew this was too good to be true,
my ugliness has finally shown through.

Why did this have to happen,
Whats the reason i have to hurt from deep within.

If only i could wear face paint everyday,
Maybe the feelings we had could of stayed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "My heart skipped a beat whenever i seen your smile." =Saw your smile.

    I found this to be incredibly sad, bittersweet and moving all rolled into one.

    "I knew this was too good to be true,
    my ugliness has finally shown through."

    ^^Those lines were amazing, so much melancholy and bitterness in that couplet, it really tugs at the reader's heartstrings.

    The onlt thing I didn't like about this was that the I's weren't capatilized, but that's just me being picky.

    Overall, you did a good job with this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is very lovely even tho it is sad...its horrible loosing someone you truely love...keep up the wonderful work, keep on smiling! =)

    MickeysBabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem...i really enjoyed reading it..and sometimes i feel the exact same way... it can be tough...but eventually it will pass...

    amazing poem.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Aww im sure your not ugly and life is a bit*h to some and the bi*chy its nice too ironik really :S anyway im really liking your style of writing even after these 4 poems il be reading more of your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    This title deffinately caught my eye. I'm very glad I read this. It is loving but yet sad at the same time. 5/5

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