This was a lovely poem and a great read. It flowed very nicely. Keep up the good work.

Alyson

I really enjoyed reading this. Even though you were venting your emotions and thoughts just pieced in perfectly! great write. Kind of long tho but reading it is worth it! I have the same feelings too so your not alone either.
5/5

Yuor venting, made your word just come to life.This has got to be the only poem, that has rambled that made sense to me. that is diffrent, and I love diffrent. I have to give you a 5/5 for this one just for being diffrent.

Another beautiful write from u....great work o this 1 too...the flow was flawless..u penned in emotions just perfectly...long though but worth reading!!....amazing work!
Kp it up!

5/5!!=)
xxPoojaxx

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Thank you for the comments this was very good 5/5

I thought the poem was long but it was really written nicely and the words flowed so well. It was kind of like a story and I got lost in it for a while lol Excellent job 5/5

I like "venting" poems cuz you dont think about what you are saying it just comes out and that what makes poetry real! I really like this poem cuz a lot of stuff has happened with my freinds and family but im still gonna be here for them too! 5/5