I love this one great job.

Nice, short, simple, but although I did like it, it wasn't as good as some of your others. I don't know what it is, but something seems to be missing, an important element.

Brad

This poem was awesome, ive read some of your others too and all so far i think theyre great!

I really like this one... I kan relate.. Well written..

I'm sorry you feel like this.
I wish I could make you feel better.
This poem is very moving, I love it.
As i love all your poems.
Thank you for writing them.
And thank God for putting you here.

5/5

-Tiana

Omg tht was frikin awesum good job

I love this poem it so sad
I can relate to(:

I'm screaming in the inside...
Yet I cannot be heard

^^ I love that part so sad

100/100
Just amazging your poems

xx

Too good....