Beautiful poem..very lovely work...sweet poem..yet sad though....but it's well penned..
n i like theway u've presnted the poem...Good wrk!Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Oh, a very nicely written beautiful poem, you have a perfect flow with great rhyme.
also the emotion and feelings are showing through out the poem,
great job
a 5/5 from me because you really deserve it.

Interesing...Luv the whole poem :)