Stranger

by Delie   May 19, 2007


Stranger
for Goran Rahim

Dear Mister Stranger,
I do not know you.
The only thing I know,
Is that you have a princess and a foe.

That princess was swept away,
By her prince, your foe.
Now she is all alone, astray...
But you love her; does she even know?

Dear Mister Stranger,
Is your name forgotten?
Does she know your name?
Does she know your aim?

Your aim is for her to see,
All the pure love in you,
And the amazing guy you can be.
Then, one day she'll be your boo.

Dear Mister Stranger,
you'll have to wait long.
Because at the moment her eyes are closed,
And her tears exposed.

Maybe you'll start off as friends.
You'll wipe away those tears,
You'll wipe away his amends,
And her mascara smears.

Dear Mister Stranger,
Give this girl some time.
Her heart is broken,
From the foe's words spoken.

One day your story,
Will have a happy ending,
An ending with full glory,
And with hearts mending.

Dear Mister Stranger,
This is now goodbye.
I wish you the best of luck,
And that she'll realise, you're no schmuck.

You see;
love is a bit of danger,
love is a mystery...
Goodbye Mister Stranger.
Now do you see?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I really really liked it. The flow was nice and the word choice was wonderful. i gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Dear Mister Stranger sounds a bit awkward.
    Dear Sir Stranger sounds a bit nicer to me.
    First stanza feels forced.
    It also doesn't make that much sense to me.
    Most of your lines seems pretty forced.
    Some doesn't even make sense.
    I'm sorry...
    But I do not think this is a five.
    Hopefully you do not get offended.
    If you want my vote (a four)
    PM me.
    Other than that.
    Good day :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Thank you alot for this greatest poem on this earth, this means alot.........
    I hope you continue with your great poetry and i wish to see ya success.....
    take care and tnx again.

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