Love for you

by mohamed   May 19, 2007


I do love you
why dont you believe me
I do care for you
why do you care how much it is
how much I care about you
is how big my fist is
no, dont take me wrong
coz its the size of my heart
even though it looks small
its full of love for you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is a very sweet poem by you!
    One word of advice: capitalize all you i's and there is a little mis-spell in the fifth sentece it should be "about you".
    I trust you to change it and rate this poem a 5/5!

    Best wishes,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Sweet poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Good poem i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is really really good. Keep up the great work 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Good one!!!

    God bless u

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