Notice Me

by Marcus   May 20, 2007


Everyday I see you I admire you
But you dont even seem to notice Im there
Whenever I notice youre not here, my body desires you
I wish you would realize that we could be a perfect pair

You should take the time to notice me and get to know me
Then you would see that I am sincere and one of a kind
And I have the potential to be whatever you need your man to be
Go with the flow and let our souls intertwine

All Im saying is notice me and acknowledge my existence
I am unique and I could bring joy to your life
Stop pushing me away with your negligence and resistance
Let this be our beginning that will end with you as my wife

If this is not good enough then let me know what else to do
No matter what it is I promise I will always strive
I am so determined because my ambition is you
I'll keep trying to get you until I'm no longer alive

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  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    I think this is a really good poem..
    the rhyming is perfect but it seems like you based the whole sentences on the words that rhymed not the other way around..
    but other than that the poem is totally perfect you are really talented keep it up
    <3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by JSydney

    Beautiful.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. It's a great write and I liked the format. I gave it a five out of five:)

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Excellent piece! It flowed perfectly and it rhymed good. But in the first 2 stanzas, in my opinion, you used too much of the word 'notice' you can leave one or 2 but for the other one maybe try another word that means notice but not the woird notice, hope that made sense lol. But anyways this was a pretty good poem. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    I loved it. i can relate it to a little, keep up the good work

    =]

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