Comments : Nobody's Child

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    This poem brought tears that won't stop. To close to my heart.

    Nobody's child is gone for today
    Somebody loves her, she smiles and she plays
    Arms hug her closely, tender the care
    If she's hungry or lonely, her angel is there

    Thank God for her angel.
    Excellent poem Debbie. Lets hope this is the end of her sadness.
    Love you
    your sis Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Sasha

    Omg that brought tears to my eyes you really ahve a talent for writting poetry

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    IM so glad it had a good ending nice poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, great flow sad and deep:Nobody's child falling fast through the cracks
    Precious time lost, can never give back
    I can agree on that ,thanks for sharing, your friend Tracy 5/5 great job

  • 10 years ago

    by bleedingtears

    Wow, this brought tears to my eyes also. you have a wonderful talent.
    Nicely done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some o my poems.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 10 years ago

    by kolorful

    Nice poem. really touching. sad how that can happen. nice ending, though :)

  • 10 years ago

    by lucinda

    Such a sad and moving poem, but a great ending. keep writing great poems

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Ever so sad. such a beautiful little child. thank god for good people who step up and handle other responsbilites. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This really saddened me to think that there are so many kids out there so lost and lonely. enjoyed reading this, it is perfectly written. x

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah its awsome. i realy understand you this words. and i loved your poem take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    Is this really happening because its horrible. An unattended child? He will be worse when he grows up. Disturbing imagery, beautifully rendered in words. Although I hope this ones only a fantasy. Definitely a 5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Alicia M

    So true! I love this poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Chimaen

    WOW... the rhythm is PERFECT...what a message. great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Shelly

    Great work I really like this poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Wow..amazing work, 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jodi

    Wow that poem brought me right back to when I had to watch that happen to a child because she too fell through the cracks... Idid not make me sad though because I know that she is in heaven waiting for me to play with her and hold her. I gave you a FIVE for this poem and I look forward to reading more.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh, Debbie. I loved this one, it was so sad, i could see the little child, and it brought pain to my eyes.
    A really sad and emotional poem, that was written wonderfully.
    love Tara-Kay

  • 10 years ago

    by Sabrina Kay

    Wow that's really all i can say....when you can bring tears to the eyes of those that don't even know you that's a gift..You have talent.

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Nobody's child falling fast through the cracks
    Precious time lost, can never give back

    The Angel comes....