Aw sorry to hear that... I know how that goes. Happy belated b-day and keep writing!

Wow..Kay, im sorry....its tought, but u'll make it through..

Wow, i know exactly how you feel now. i was heart broken from this one guy. but now im with a guy named patrick and i feel like he doesn't care

This poem is awesome. It's so very sad. I tried to call my ex on her birthday but she didn't answer or call back so I was like can't say i didn't try. Anyway awesome hob 5/5
-vino

Excellent poem, great flow and wording of good, sorry bout the deal with you and yours,but you deserve better, going through the same old bs myself, you have great talent, please use it, good luck and great job, your friend Tracy dean, 5/5 ,,,p.s ,let me know what you think of my work sometimes,

Good poem it is a shame that people get treat like that for trying to be with someone I am in the same situation right now

Great poem.I really liked it.

This is cute. i like it,

I thought it was well written. Sorry that happened. Happy birthday a little late! 4/5 message me if you wanna talk sometime.

I hope they were good memories, I'd feel bad if they weren't, but I'm sorry that he did that. Thanks by the way, I like your poem as well, hope you had a good birthday other than that.

This.
is.
so.
good.
end of story,
<3jess

This.
is.
so.
good.
end of story,
<3jess

Gooooooog girl:):):)

i loved it very much :):):)

i will give ya 5/5:):):)

keep up the good work:):):)

khuloodan:):)
smile all the time:)

Wow nice poem
u have talent keep up the good work!
sorry to hear ur bday was like dat though =/
it just shows ur growin stronger!
=D

I love ure poem thanx for commentin mah poems

I kan relate 2 thiz i lik it loootz

Woww...dis poem is gud!!! i went throu da same problem and the bad thing about it is dat mah bday is on valentines day. :'[

I always enjoy reading poems containing self recognition. realizing our worth is one of the hardest but most important things. this is well written. you've conveyed your feelings in a realistic manor. excellent! oh- & "happy birthday to you... " :)

Ay mija...that was sad..... :( but i liked it! good job!

Wow beautiful...i just loved to first and last stanza...they were powerful -----great job

tara