Comments : A mothers love

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awww...ver sweet work....beautiful..i've a thing 4 babies...lol...maybe tht's y i found this mother-baby poem cute!..kp it up!
    5/5!...
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Liked the topic, it was sweet, but it seemed awkward at times to me, in the beginning but then at the end it got better, I really liked, it was great :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very sweet poem. Ireally liked it. It had alot of emotions it. Keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Nice poem, you seem to love your baby.

    ~*Alex*~

  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Well, this poem was probably the sweetest poem I have ever read. The emotion was amazing with these lines, and you spoke true to your heart. There needs to be more poems like this on our site. A wonderful job, good luck with everything. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww sweet poem. there were some gremmatical errors though. mmm...i cant get over how cute it is. 5/5 on the heart and rhyming put into the poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    What a beautifull write ,with every new thing your baby learns its a moment to treasure and you'll hold on to every one of those treasured memories.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Hey gurl this poem is great its a mothers love and it made me cry when i read it keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Such a touching poem. It really describes the love in the mother-child relationship. Great word choice and great imagery. Wonderfully written poem

    Keep writting

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    "i love you sweetie,
    more than life itself.
    no one can take you from me,
    not even god himself."

    Good job, ^ is my fave. part
    Perfect poem and fab. words
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwww so sweet...

    there are a few grammer mistakes and a typo or two...

    "it seems just yesterday you was in my belly"

    was should be were....

    "take you time baby"

    in this line you should be your....

    but other than that this poem was well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This reflects the most beautiful bond on earth

  • Aww, this is really nice. I'm gonna give birth to my baby next month n I'm happy to be a mommy. I really, really loved this poem.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    What a truly sweet poem, you sound like a wonderful mother. Keep on writing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by retro babii

    Awww a mothers love really is the strongest of them all :) oh im all glassy-eyed after that :') cograts btw :)
    Xx...[retro babii]...xX

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The flow was a tad off
    but it didn't really matter because this was a beautiful poem
    I truly loved it
    babies are adorable
    4/5 kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz how cute!!!!
    i really liiked this poem...
    i writting from the heart!! 5/5

    <3 i love you silly