Comments : Breaking my heart

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Though your flow is shaky and off, i still loved it. You had some really good lines in it. Here are a few i liked

    thought i could mend the gap between love and hate.
    but i don't wanna suffice 4 u.

    great job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    Absolutly amazing Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Airika

    It was good emotion...and i love then end
    5/5
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Absoultly awseome. Although it was shaky at some parts the whole thing was awseome put together. Most people can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by PaTzLaJaRa

    Really god poemm!!