Comments : Broken Hearted Shame

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats a really good poem, such powerful language, if you ever need to talk courts i'll always be here. xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Oh my Gosh!
    This is such a heartbreaking write. So much emotion and hurt went into this. So many times children are taken advantage of in many different ways. It breaks my heart. I wish you the best.

    Dixie

  • 10 years ago

    by rEn

    U used powerful words...incredible...

  • 10 years ago

    by m4mm07h

    I still fail to beleve people are so crazy that they use others against their will. ur gonna make me cry ;;(. I think im gonna be a friggin cop (not a corrupt one tho ::P)

  • 10 years ago

    by Sharai Gazelle

    **wow**

  • 10 years ago

    by Painless Sorrow

    From the toip to the bottom.
    Bottom to top it stops.
    From the core of forgotten.
    To the middle of my thoughts.
    Taken far from the saftey.
    The pictures there.
    Memory wunna see me.
    So why should i care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Wow! i love this one, it has so much emotion, its a truly beautifully poem.. 5/5
    xx