Four Month Mark

Awehh..so sorry about your loss Dear, I hope it gets better for you. An excellent poem in her memory, it`s filled with emotion and pain that the reader can feel it just by the way you portrayed it. Great job.

"There's still a sense of a huge great loss"

^^ I felt like you could have used just one or the other of 'huge' and 'great' it would flow a lot better that way.

"So I'm writing this tear-filled letter"

^^ LOVED that line !

5.5
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This poem was so sad.
i can relate to it very well.

My days feel so empty without you here
But I still talk to you all the time
I hold pillows and talk tears to you
You're never far from my mind

The wedding day is creeping up
Only two short years left to go
I wish you were here to plan and help
But wishing's not what you want, I know

beautifully written stanza
love the way you have written this poem
its so deep filled with emotions.
the imageyr was perfect and the rhyming was ok.

best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Aww.. Very sad, brang tears to my eyes. Writing wise its great! they just keep getting better and better, awesome work. 5/5

-Blessed

I am going through the exact same thing you are right now. And well you know that since we talked. Hun I know its hard and I am not going to tell you its going to get easier since I know you know that it wont and I wont tell you it is because I have lost many people and it doesnt and I dont want you get your hopes up. keep your head high since there wont be a day wehre I dont care. I will always be here for you through day and night. love yea

Chelsea

Aw Gem,
You will never stop missing her but it get easier to deal with. I know it feels like it wont but one morning you realsie that it does get better becuase it has to. Such a moving piece Gem. Keep your chin up and take care.

Kelly
xx