Lost (Etheree)

by Fsams   May 21, 2007


Lost
In you
And your love
The sweet lovely feelings
Overwhelmed by your love
Takes me to a new world
It's just you and me together
Under the blue sky, on the sandy beach
Calm and quiet our words waved in the air
And till the crack of dawn I remained lost there

Written by Fsams
21/05/2007
15:44
Inspired by Cindy

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can
also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    This is very lovely. I've never heard o tho form of poetry, but I think it's really cool. Your work inspires.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Amazing! The structure was again as you described and fitted perfectly. The rhyming and choosing of words were amazing. A definite 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, filled with such beauty and a lot of emotions. I like this form, you did an amazing job with it.
    Whole poem is truly touching, I especially liked the ending, it is very effective.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Really good
    just check your syllables

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I said it before and i'll keep saying it. you have such a wonderful talent with your words and everyone poem i read, i believe it more and more. this was such a beautiful etheree, and it was well expressed, loved it 5/5

    nikki

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