Again, not as strong an ending as it could be. good regardless. It's got a very singsongy rhythm.

Another brilliant poem! The rhyme scheme was ok, but the flow was nice and strong. Keep your pen to the paper. *5/5*

Damn, this poem kind of freaked me out. It's really good, but the flow was a bit rocky. It's still pretty good.

.:CiNdY:.

I love this piece... Its so descriptive as well as very vivid. Great job. Stunning piece.

I wrote this when all my friends graduated high school but I was held back a year.